英语与国语作文(范文)(8)
Teenagers should be allowed to work during school holidays? Do you agree?Paragraph 1:
1.In today’s age of information and technology, it is not outlandish奇怪 to see teenagers working part-time as promoters or waitress during school holidays.
2.Working part-time has become common普遍 among youths today.
3.Why are their parents willing愿意 to allow their children to work?
4.It is because most of the teenagers nowadays will not plan their holiday wisely善用地 and end up with doing nothing什么都不做.
5.For instance, they will spend their time on surfing the Internet or playing computers games.
6.Therefore, some of the parents will allow their children to work part-time so that they can at least learn something during their working time.
7.On the other hand另一方面,there are also parents do not allow their children to work as their parents think their children are not mature成熟 enough to work.
8.In my opinion, I partially一部分的 agree that teenagers should be allowed to work during school holidays due to the reason teenagers can earn their pocket money, gain some experience during working and learn something extra during working.
9.On the contrary相反地, the reason that I am not totally agree is because of it has the probability可能性 to influence影响 the children’s academic performance.
Paragraph 2:
1.School holidays are defined定义 as a period for students to rest and keep away from their school and working is known as physical and mental activities carried out to fulfill the task 完成任务 and is rewarded.
Paragraph 2:
1.School holidays are defined定义 as a period for students to rest and keep away from their school and working is known as physical and mental activities carried out to fulfill the task 完成任务 and is rewarded.
2.First and foremost, pocket money can be earned by teenagers through working during school holidays.
3.This is due to the reason that the teenagers can save the money they earn from the working and they can buy something they need.
4.We can take the example of for those who work as promoter or waiter they can earn RM 5 per hour.
5.Therefore, their parents’ burden负担 can be reduced减轻 as teenagers do not ask for pocket money from their parents for daily expenses日常开销.
6.Besides, parents do not need to worry their school fee or tuition fee as their children can fork out on their own自己付.
7.Teenagers can also afford有能力 to buy things that they need such as stationery, reference books参考书 and others.
8.It cannot be denied that无可否认 teenagers can be allowed to work is because of they can earn extra money to help lightening减轻 their parents’ burden.
Paragraph 3:
1.On top of that, teenagers can gain获得 some experience 经验 during working.
2.This is in light of the fact that teenagers can have opportunity机会 to exposed暴露/开始 to working life at early stage早期.
Paragraph 3:
1.On top of that, teenagers can gain获得 some experience 经验 during working.
2.This is in light of the fact that teenagers can have opportunity机会 to exposed暴露/开始 to working life at early stage早期.
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